Moonchild
All comments are welcome.
Sooo... here's my very personal opinion on it
I'm honestly not a fan of the line ""Should I find you a bride?"" It's a bit of an outdated way of thinking, maybe that's why? But I like the poem overall.
I also like those poems where the title kind of explains the meaning or sums up what is written later, but is never mentioned in the poem itself, know what I mean? Like for example:
It's like being
in the autumn
on the trees
the leaves
And you might wonder what is it about. The tile of the poem is "Soldiers".
That's why I imagine her not finishing the sentence "As you were my mo-...", because it give the idea of her finishing her last breath while saying this poem (so it's her last thought, tragic...) and it also makes the readers think "oh, it's moonchild!"